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The Open Boat by Stephen Crane

    from The Red Badge of Courage and Other Stories

This Level 1 ELLSA lesson can be accessed on the internet at

    http://www.rdlthai.com/ellsa_openboat1.html

Lesson plan and text: Jeffrey Taschner, John Morgan, 1999

    Print and web-adaptation: John Morgan, 1999

    ? USIA, 1999. All rights reserved

1. SYNOPSIS

1a) Synopsis

     The Open Boat is a dramatic short story based on Stephen Crane’s own real-life

    experience, when a ship he was sailing on to Cuba sank in high seas off the coast of Florida. He was a correspondent for an American newspaper and he was on his way to write about problems that led up to The Spanish-American War in 1898.

     As the story opens, four men: a cook, a correspondent, an oiler and a captain, are in a lifeboat in stormy seas. They are off the coast of Florida, just after their ship has sunk. Soon, they spot the light of a lighthouse somewhere in the distance, so they know they are near land. Although they can eventually see the shore, the waves are so big that it is too dangerous to try to take the boat in to land. The waves will destroy the lifeboat and possibly crash hard on the men in the surf, maybe killing them.

     People on the shore see the lifeboat and try to signal to the men to come in, but the sea is just too rough. The four men in the boat hope that the people on land will send a bigger boat out to rescue them, but that does not happen. Instead, the men are forced to take the boat further out to sea, where the waves are not quite as big and dangerous. They spend a total of two nights in the lifeboat and take turns rowing and then resting. They are not sure if they will survive and they have exchanged addresses in case any of them should die.

     On the morning after their second night, the men are weak and no fishing boat has come to rescue them. The captain decides that they must try to take the lifeboat as close to shore as possible and then be ready to swim when the surf inevitably turns the boat over and throws the men into the cold sea. This is exactly what happens. As they get closer to land, the waves get bigger and bigger. Just as they expect, a big wave comes and all the men are thrown into the sea. The lifeboat turns over and the four men must swim into shore. There are rescuers waiting on shore who help the men out of the water.

     Strangely, as the cook, captain and correspondent reach the shore safely and are helped out of the water, they discover that, somehow, the oiler, the strongest man and best swimmer, has drowned after being smashed in the surf by a huge wave. As night comes, the men still hear the pounding of the waves on the shore the voice of

    the sea. Now, they understand the power of the sea, and how easily it can claim even the strongest man’s life.

1b) Vocab checkpoint

    • dramatic (adjective) When something is dramatic it is characterized by strong feelings, emotions or adverse physical conditions (as in the meaning used here). It is often used to describe a written style or method of acting (compare with drama, a noun, which means play acting). Also, drama can be used to describe real events, and is often heard in news reports.

    • high seas (noun) High seas is a term used to describe rough, open sea where the coast may be at a long distance or not visible at all. It may also be used to describe sea in independent waters (not covered by the law of any particular country).

    • oiler (noun) An oiler is an engine room worker on a ship whose job is to keep mechanical parts oiled so they do not go rusty at sea.

    • crash (verb) The most common meaning of crash is associated with the collision of cars. Crash may also be used with the action of waves breaking on the shore, or on something like a boat, swimmer or other object in the sea.

    • signal (verb) To signal is to indicate using hands, a flag, a fire, lights or flares, etc., with the intention of seeking help from somebody else. A signal as a noun is a physical symbol intended to warn or indicate something to people (e.g. traffic lights may be called traffic signals).

    • inevitably (adverb) If something is inevitable it means it will definitely happen, no matter what action is taken to prevent it from happening.

    • smashed (verb) Smashed is another way of saying broken. In this case it is used figuratively to describe how the strongest of the men was beaten by the sea.

• huge (adjective) Huge means very large. Common synonyms of huge include

    enormous, massive and gigantic.

    • pounding (noun) The pounding of the waves describes the constant action and noise of waves breaking against the shore or against the boat. To pound is to beat or hit something constantly.

    • claim (verb) To claim in this example, is to take. When a person claims something, they make a statement to say it is their own (as with lost property at a police station). In this case the sea claims the strongest man's life.

2) PRE-STORY

    2a) Seven Scenes What is the most famous ship to ever sink at sea? What

     happened? Have you seen the movie? Try to retell the story as just seven

     important scenes or events from the movie. Work with a friend and use just one

     sentence for each event.

     1) _______________________________________________________

     2) _______________________________________________________

     3) _______________________________________________________

     4) _______________________________________________________

     5) _______________________________________________________

     6) _______________________________________________________

     7) _______________________________________________________

     Compare your Seven Scenes with other people and discuss the story.

     Have you ever had, or witnessed an accident in a boat? If not an accident, think

     about a frightening (or exciting) experience. What happened? Share your story

     or write a short description for another group, who can plan some questions to

     interview you about the event.

2b) Analyzing a story's plot: Freytag's Pyramid

     Sometimes life is not simple. Stories are not always easy to understand, either.

     Gustav Freytag was a Nineteenth Century German novelist who saw common

     patterns in the plots of stories and novels and developed a diagram to analyze

     hem. He diagrammed a story's plot using a pyramid like the one shown here:

     Break Down the Pyramid

     Not every story you read can be diagrammed perfectly according to Freytag's

     Pyramid, but many can. Before we look at an example with Titanic, lets try to

     simplify Freytag's Pyramid by breaking it down into just three parts: beginning,

     middle and end.

     • Which parts of Freytag's Pyramid would form the beginning of a story?

     • Which parts would make up the middle?

     • Which parts would make up the end?

     The Stages of Freytag's Pyramid

     1. Exposition: setting the scene. The writer introduces the characters

     and setting, providing description and background.

     2. Inciting Incident: something happens to begin the action. A single

     event usually signals the beginning of the main conflict. The

    inciting incident is sometimes called 'the complication'.

     3. Rising Action: the story builds and gets more exciting.

     4. Climax: the moment of greatest tension in a story. This is often the most

     exciting event. It is the event that the rising action builds up to and that

     the falling action follows.

     5. Falling Action: events happen as a result of the climax and we know

     that the story will soon end.

     6. Resolution: the character solves the main problem/conflict or someone

     solves it for him or her.

     7. Dénouement: (a French term, pronounced: day-noo-moh) the ending.

     At this point, any remaining secrets, questions or mysteries which remain

     after the resolution are solved by the characters or explained by the

     author. Sometimes the author leaves us to think about the THEME or

     future possibilities for the characters. You can think of the dénouement

     as the opposite of the exposition: instead of getting ready to tell us the

     story by introducing the setting and characters, the author is getting ready

     to end it with a final explanation of what actually happened and how the

     characters think or feel about it. This can be the most difficult part of the

     plot to identify, as it is often very closely tied to the resolution.

2c) Titanic Plot Pyramid

     To help you understand the definitions above, try to apply each step in Freytag's Pyramid to the seven scenes you wrote down earlier. How well do they fit? Analyze with a partner. Next, copy Freytag's Pyramid on a piece of paper and label each point on the pyramid with these terms:

     • Exposition

     • Inciting Incident

     • Rising Action

     • Climax

     • Falling Action

     • Resolution

     • Dénouement

     Here is one teacher's analysis of the seven most important moments in Titanic. Write each event above or below the point that it matches on Freytag's Pyramid. The order should be the same as it occurred in the film.

     Jack, Rose and the other passengers wait for lifeboats.

     Jack stops Rose from committing suicide.

     The Titanic splits in two and sinks.

     Elderly Rose drops the necklace into the sea and visualizes Jack as she

     dies peacefully.

     The Titanic prepares to leave England for America with Jack and Rose

     onboard.

     Rose is rescued and gives her name as Rose Dawson. As a result, Cal

     never finds her again.

     Rose's mother, her fiancé, Cal, and Cal's bodyguard try to keep Jack

     away from Rose as the two begin to fall in love. The ship hits an iceberg.

     Check your answers with the answer key at the end of this lesson and discuss Freytag's terms and definitions again as they relate to the plot of Titanic.

3. IN-STORY

    3a) The Open Boat is based on Stephen Crane's own real-life experience, when

     a ship he was sailing on to Cuba sank in high seas off the coast of Florida. He

     was a correspondent for an American newspaper and he was on his way to

     write about problems that led up to The Spanish-American War in 1898. How

     many men are in the lifeboat when the story opens? Who are they? How do you

     think they got there?

     Can you remember which character says each of the following lines from the

     story?

     1. I wish we had a sail. ___________________

     2. They'll see us before long and come out after us. ___________________

     3. We'll overturn. ___________________

     4. A little more north, sir. ___________________

     5. Shall I take her to sea again captain? ___________________

     6. Billie, would you row for awhile? ___________________

     7. Come to the boat! Come to the boat. ___________________

     8. Thanks old man. ___________________

     9. What's that? ___________________

     These quotes occur in the same order in the story as they do above. Try to use

     the quotes above to remember the important events of a story and tell with a

     friend. If you are in a class, different pairs can take turns retelling the story.

3b) Following the plot

     Number these events from 1-12 in the order in which they occurred in the story.

     • ____ The captain saw the lighthouse on Mosquito Inlet.

     • ____ The man on the shore saved the correspondent.

     • ____ The men exchanged addresses.

     • ____ The captain's ship sank.

     • ____ The lifeboat sank.

     • ____ The captain saw the lighthouse on Mosquito Inlet.

     • ____ The correspondent saw that the oiler had drowned.

     • ____ A man on the shore waved his coat at the men in the boat.

     • ____ The second morning arrived.

     • ____ The first morning arrived.

     • ____ People come with blankets and coffee.

     • ____ The captain gave his coat to the cook and correspondent to make a sail.

4. EXERCISES

4a) Applying Freytag's Pyramid to The Open Boat.

     Look at the blank Plot Pyramid and label each of Freytag's seven steps from

     memory. Next, re-order the events below from The Open Boat by copying the

     corresponding sentence below each term on the pyramid.

     The men jump off the boat into the water as the boat overturns.

     4 men are in a lifeboat after a shipwreck.

     The correspondent, cook and captain are rescued, but realize that the

     oiler has drowned.

     As the dead oiler is carried onto land, the other three men finally

     understand the power of the sea and how lucky they are to be alive.

     The captain sees the lighthouse.

     The men try to row the boat to the shore.

     The men swim to shore.

4b) Freytag's Pyramid: review and extension

     Draw Plot Pyramids like the ones you did for Titanic and The Open Boat for the

     other stories you have already worked with in ELLSA.

     Use single sentences to describe the key event/scene for each step in the plot.

     Display them in class and discuss differences and similarities. Be prepared to

     defend your choices.

5) FOLLOW-UP

     Life Raft

     1. You are traveling by passenger ferry to a resort island in the middle of the

     Pacific Ocean. Suddenly a storm hits and the sea gets very rough. The

     ferry starts to sink quickly. You and your friends find a very small life raft.

     As the ferry sinks you must decide what you can take with you into the life

     raft and what you must leave behind. You only have room for 5 things

     from the list below. Which five will you take?

     • a portable stereo with AM/FM radio _____ _____

     • a white bed sheet _____ _____

     • a small mirror _____ _____

     • a bottle of whiskey _____ _____

     • a box of canned tuna _____ _____

     • a large bag of chocolate candy _____ _____

     • a map of the Pacific Ocean _____ _____

     • a mosquito net _____ _____

     • a fishing kit _____ _____

     • 5 meters of nylon rope _____ _____

     • a life jacket _____ _____

     • a 5 liter bottle of water _____ _____

     Consider these items carefully and think of ways to justify your choices.

     Why have you decided to take the five items that you have selected?

     Find out what other people would choose to take.

     2. Ranking

     Rank the objects above from 1-12, based on their importance for your

     survival and rescue. 1 is the most useful and 12 is the least useful. Check

     your answers with the answer key below.

    ANSWER KEY

2c) Titanic Plot Pyramid: answer key

     1. Exposition

     The Titanic prepares to leave England for America with Jack and Rose

     on-board.

     2. Inciting Incident

     Jack stops Rose from committing suicide.

     3. Rising Action

     Rose's mother, her fiancé, Cal, and Cal's bodyguard try to keep Jack

     away from Rose as the two begin to fall in love. The ship hits an iceberg.

     4. Climax

     The Titanic splits in two and sinks.

     5. Falling Action

     Jack, Rose and the other passengers wait for lifeboats.

     6. Resolution

     Rose is rescued and gives her name as Rose Dawson. As a result, Cal

     never finds her again.

     7. Dénouement

     Elderly Rose drops the necklace into the sea and visualizes Jack as she

     dies peacefully.

3a) Lines from the story: answer key

     1. I wish we had a sail. The captain, pg 4, pa 2

     2. They'll see us before long and come out after us. The cook, pg 4, pa 6

     3. We'll overturn. Everybody, pg 5, pa 7

     4. A little more north, sir. The oiler, pg 5, pa 2

     5. Shall I take her to sea again captain? The oiler, pg 6, pa 5

     6. Billie, would you row for awhile? The correspondent, pg 11, pa 3

     7. Come to the boat! Come to the boat. The captain, pg 14, pa 9

     8. Thanks old man. The correspondent, pg 15, pa 2

     9. What's that? the old man/rescuer, pg 16, pa 2

3b) Following the plot: answer key

     1. The ship sank.

     2. The first morning arrived.

     3. The captain saw the lighthouse on Mosquito Inlet.

     4. The correspondent saw the lighthouse.

     5. The captain gave his coat to the cook and correspondent to make a sail.

     6. The men exchange addresses.

     7. A man on the shore waved his coat at the men in the boat.

     8. The second morning arrived.

     9. The lifeboat sank.

     10. The man on the shore saved the correspondent.

     11. The correspondent saw that the oiler had drowned.

     12. People come with blankets and coffee.

    4a) Applying Freytag's Pyramid to The Open Boat: answers

     1. Exposition 4 men are in a lifeboat after a shipwreck.

     2. Inciting Incident The captain sees the lighthouse.

     3. Rising Action The men try to row the boat to the shore.

     4. Climax The men jump off the boat into the water as

     the boat overturns.

     5. Falling Action The men swim to shore.

     6. Resolution The correspondent, cook and captain are

     rescued, but realize that the oiler has

     drowned.

     7. Dénouement As the dead oiler is carried onto land, the

     other three men finally understand the power

     of the sea and how lucky they are to be alive.

5) Life Raft: suggested answer key

     The following rating is based on the professional opinions of officers from The

     US Merchant Marine.

     1. Mirror for signaling rescue boats or planes.

     2. Five liter bottle of water for drinking.

     3. One case of canned tuna to eat.

     4. White bed sheet to collect rain water, provide shelter, maybe as a signal

     flag.

     5. Candy as a reserve food supply.

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